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I hate the way you look at me, then whisper in my ear
I hate how you talk to me, so smooth and with no fear
I hate that big huge smile, the one that’s always on your
face
I hate that with just a wink, you can put me in my place
I hate how you know everything, how you read my mind
I hate that you make me feel so trapped, but never confined
I hate that you always know what to say, and at the right
time
I hate you so much it makes me sick, it even makes me rhyme
I hate it when you make me laugh, even worse when you make
me cry
I hate it that you’re always right, especially when you lie
I hate all your darkness, those stupid black clothes
I hate that you make me smile, even though it never shows
I hate that I can hear you, and how loud you are
I hate that you can see right though me, and see every
single scar
I hate the way you toy with me, playing on my dreams
I hate that you listen to my wishes, and hear all my
screams
And yet, what I hate most, above all the rest
Is I don’t hate you, not at all, as you may have guessed
©2005-2010 ~VivaLaVieBoheme
:iconvivalavieboheme:

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Yeah, I wrote this about a certain person...he liked it, so I figured I would post it...eh...

*Edit* I knew I had heard this before, and thank you to gratzius for telling me it was from the moive, "10 Things I Hate About You", so yeah, that is where I got the idea.

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:icongratzius:
A bit of a steal from '10 Things I Hate About You' but generally I liked the way you changed around some of the words nn;

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"Life is easier to take than you'd think; all that is necessary is to accept the impossible, do without the indispensable and bear the intolerable."
Kathleen Norris
:iconkutlessnewgrace43:
Concur.
That part always makes me choke up though.
Much love!!

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:tux:

-Regina-

"No one is allowed to be so proud that they never reached out when they cared enough."
:iconvivalavieboheme:
Yeah, that's the movie! I knew I had heard it before, thanks for letting me know what I need to credit, and good to know you liked it. :rose:

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:fuzzydemon:
:icongratzius:
Oh! You didn't know the movie? Practically gotta be one of my favorite movies XD Everyone could only wish they would be able to write that poem.. I love it! But you did well!

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"Life is easier to take than you'd think; all that is necessary is to accept the impossible, do without the indispensable and bear the intolerable."
Kathleen Norris
:iconpaikage:
i love you.

i just... love you....

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Maybe I could jump? Jump off the Broklyn Bridge... But I don't live in Broklyn and I don't know how to swim.
:iconvivalavieboheme:
I knew I had seen it, I couldn't remember the name, that was all. And thank you so much, I love to hear I've done well :-). :rose:

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:fuzzydemon:
:iconthe-guess-knot:
¡muy bien!

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"I Want to know how God created this world. I am not interested in this or that phenomenon, I want to know His thoughts, the rest are details"------ Albert Einstien

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